Critical Evaluation of a master’s thesis
Unterschiede zwischen traditionellem Sport und E-Sport
Inszenierung und Content-Marketing im Vergleich
By Philipp Landgraf
University: Paris Lodron-Universität Salzburg
Level of Design
The Design of the Thesis is quite simple. Easy to read but not a lot of design elements, it is rather straight forward. At some points there are words marked bold.
Degree of Innovation
Since the work is comparing sports to e-sports the innovation factor is high. There is not a lot of works around this topic yet.
Independence
The piece is written by a professional – different types of literature was used while also combining different views from different topics. It looks like an independent work.
Outline and structure
Overall, the work is structured into two different pieces, showing the e-sports and the sports media differences. There are all parts necessary for a scientific work furthermore the writher shows insights in camera shots, positioning and surroundings.
Degree of communication
The text is straight forward, easy to read. It has some technical aspects but explains it in detail. Everyone can read this article.
Scope of the work
This thesis shows on 117 pages with pictures the differences between sports events and e-sport events. There is also discussion focusing on detailed areas of the two events.
Orthography and accuracy
No Spelling mistakes were found in my read through.
Literature
The Literature ranges from book to e-books and online articles mostly from 2018
> Landgraf, P.: Unterschiede zwischen traditionellem Sport und E-Sport : Inszenierung und Content-Marketing im Vergleich. Salzburg, 2021.
